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Dreams Without Sleep

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Literature Text

All the tears shed
"I didn't think I would do this"
All the words said
"I don't want to lose this"
All the hours spent
"We should really go to sleep"

All leading to this
This one moment in time
"So this is it..."
Where all of this
This indecision
Will come to it's end
"I love you"
The original poem was:

All the tears shed
All the words said
All the hours done
All the days spent
All leading to this
This one moment in time
Where all of this
This indecision
Will come to an end

and I was complaining to sonomacoast about how I couldn't finish it, and she gave me the greatest idea! add small bits of conversation in between the lines. So then I wrote those in and come up with this finished product, I owe it all to her, go check her out, she's amazingly talented. Oh and she helped with the title too! :D
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forsakensolitude's avatar
wow that's really beaultiful...mind if I put it in my lj profile? =D
I'll credit of course!