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Literature Text
Hiding inside these blissful fairy tales
Where my oblivious heart rests
Reality is a most unwelcome visitor
Idealistic dreams adorn the walls
In this land where my heart resides
Love is the one thing that matters
But through it all something remains
A feeling…that this cannot last
A darkness looms at the borders
This vile cold waiting silently
For that perfect chance to strike
To tear apart what has been created
The door is shattered, splinters fly
My heart lies exposed and helpless
All that was fought for so hard
Goes fleeing out the gaping hole
Reality forces its way through
Nightmares take the place of dreams
Pessimism replacing the idealism
Depression takes control
Shattered dreams litter the cold earth
Their remnants mocking my very soul
Stabbing at my heart with all that's been lost
Cold and alone, my heart dies
Where my oblivious heart rests
Reality is a most unwelcome visitor
Idealistic dreams adorn the walls
In this land where my heart resides
Love is the one thing that matters
But through it all something remains
A feeling…that this cannot last
A darkness looms at the borders
This vile cold waiting silently
For that perfect chance to strike
To tear apart what has been created
The door is shattered, splinters fly
My heart lies exposed and helpless
All that was fought for so hard
Goes fleeing out the gaping hole
Reality forces its way through
Nightmares take the place of dreams
Pessimism replacing the idealism
Depression takes control
Shattered dreams litter the cold earth
Their remnants mocking my very soul
Stabbing at my heart with all that's been lost
Cold and alone, my heart dies
I worked on this for a while...it's not very good though
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Its definatly a thinker poem...Its shows you spent time on it and the images I get in my mind while I read are awesome! You are a far better writer than I am, but I think our writing themes are very similar. Acheiving nirvana but still being scared...
"Stabbing at my heart with all that's been lost" Best Line just because Its just like the finnaly! I empathize. Its like getting your heart ripped out and getting beaten with it.
Good shit man I always like reading your stuff!
"Stabbing at my heart with all that's been lost" Best Line just because Its just like the finnaly! I empathize. Its like getting your heart ripped out and getting beaten with it.
Good shit man I always like reading your stuff!